My First Attempt At Lyric Writing…

Hey gang, sorry for yet another long layover between posts; I really haven’t had the motivation to do anything these last few weeks, so don’t take it personally. I have an operation later this week (Gastroscopy…yikes), as well the GEDs so I probably wont have another post up for a week or so. Anyways, I figured I would show you guys a song I have been working on. I haven’t been able to match these lyrics with music yet (working on it), but they seem pretty promising. I am not too good at singing, so, I think it will be a while before you hear a complete song from me. Without further ado, here is “Modern Man“:
“The Meaning of life
written on my Walls
but I’m Illiterate.
The Truth in Lies;
Politics right?
Ignorance is bliss,
isn’t it?
Holier than thou;
maybe I am,
yet still I follow.
Over the Edge.
Fear engulfs;
stoked by those
we trust.
Blinded by faith
(no I’m not)
Chained by values
(no I’m not)
Disarmed by conscience
(no I’m not)
I am a modern man, (Whoo)”
It clearly still needs some work (Id like to get each stanza into four lines instead of 3 and 4), but it is coming along. Let me know what you think!
abbybernd said,
July 5, 2009 at 11:41 pm
it could be a megadeath song!
Ruth said,
July 7, 2009 at 2:35 pm
I like it– very deep. Is it for the song that Bryce and I listened to? I can’t wait to hear it all together!